Write about the following topic:
Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In our day and age, computer plays a vital role in every aspect of life. No one can deny that it is the most significant invention of the last century since it provides human ample opportunities to connect individuals from every nook and corner and access a variety of sources of information. However, beside the positive contributions, computer can be harmful if it is abused.
First of all, the most obvious positive contribution of computer is that it helps people interact with the other conveniently. In the past, people had to travel a long distance to visit their relatives. At present, thanks to the computer with the Internet accessed, we are able to meet and talk to our relatives and friends virtually whenever and whatever we want. This also a wonderful tool which helps us makes friends and maintains friendships more easily.
Secondly, computer is considered as the greatest library since it contains a huge amount of information. The ones who benefit most from this function are students and scholars. Ebooks on the Internet are available and accessible for them to refer relevant document as well as enhance knowledge about their area specialization. Thus, computer is a wonderful assistant for the ones who are self-taught.
However, computer also has its drawbacks. If people abuse computer, there are countless consequences steming from it. For example, insensitivity among human beings is becoming more and more serious because so many people focus too much on their virtual network but forget the actual one. Moreover, news and information on the Internet is not always trustworthy. Therefore, every single individual have to be cautious and choose the pretigious sources to update the lastest facts.
To conclude, everything has its pros and cons. Although computer has improved our life recently, it still has many potential negative influences if being abused. Therefore, we have to be smart to weigh the advantages impacts over the detrimental ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22884012539 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89135293202 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598746081505 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2609987583 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7894736842 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7894736842 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84210526316 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143622127837 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397940365725 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261834193377 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763174514696 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257515675801 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.