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Some companies are closing their offices one day per week to save energy (gas, electricity). What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
These days, energy resources such as gas and electricity are becoming more and more rarely, especially for industries. In most of countries, governments suggest to some big companies who have many factories that need much energy for their producing activities to reduce the level of using electric and gas energy. What are the positive and negative effects of this?
To begin with, several companies’ owners have many opinions with the suggestion from the governments. One of the owners said that the reduction of electricity usage in their company will affect the number of their products. To s...
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