Some companies are closing their offices one day per week to save energy (gas, electricity). What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
With energy resources being utilized every day of the week, the shortage of energy resources is being a global issue. With this in mind, many organizations take off one day every week in order to save energy; however, choosing to save energy has benefits as well as drawbacks. This essay argues that saving energy include negatives such as the production of materials decrease and overburden for employees, but positives also exist such as it minimizes pollution and saves utility expenses.
Saving the energy for one day per week results in many beneficial outputs. Utilizing the energy in a saver way will have a positive effect on our environment and save companies from the expensive utility bills. To further explain, fossil fuels are used to generate energy which results in a lot of toxic materials being exposed to the environment; however, saving these resources for one day will help in making atmosphere ecofriendly. Now, when it comes to the reduction in bills, For example, in the United States, if you ask every small business owner about their number one unpredictable cost, their answer will be electricity, by closing offices for one day will result in giving them relief.
After considering the advantages, the drawbacks now merit some meaningful discussion. Not only saving energy for one day will reduce the company production rate but also create difficulties for employees. For instance, every company has to complete the objective before the deadline by eliminating one day from the schedule will result in huge losses such as organization getting bankrupt. Besides, production problems; for instance, every employee needs to work in a peaceful environment such as without stress, with the company taking off for one day will create a burden for the employee the next day, an individual has to work overtime in order to complete work.
In conclusion, closing the office for one day per week can have positive effects on the atmosphere and limit the huge expenses of bills, but it can have more negative results such as the company getting bankrupt for not meeting the deadline and the employees getting stressed out due to overburden of work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09295774648 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69440705888 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512676056338 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.0758262963 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.666666667 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5833333333 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299417796166 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134144268364 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643263877608 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196604821775 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485611090137 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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