Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their courses in foreign countries. While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students, it also has a number of disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, it has become more and more popular for students choosing to study abroad. As a result of offering variety of grants and scholarships, it leads people to affluent choices on being a student in a foreign country. Although every student does not adopt a resolution to be overseas students, it is an attractive option for many people.
Studying abroad indicates a number of advantages. Firstly, it can provide individuals with high level of education which is taught by highly skilled teachers in contemporary facilities such as laboratories and teaching rooms, whereas, these may not be available in their country. Secondly, it might be the best chance to improve a language by daily conversations in the learning processes. Finally, studying overseas gives opportunity to find a good job which makes them desirable to prospective employers.
On the other hand, study in a foreign country has some drawbacks. The first one is that the cost of education and living in abroad is considerable higher than local universities and places so that the student might face up some financial difficulties. Another one is that students have to leave their family and friends for a long period; as a result, they miss some important occasions related to their relatives’ life.
Taking everything into consideration, the disadvantages of studying abroad is usually nature, however, I believe that the students who opt to take a education in a foreign country can acquire broad knowledge on their fields and this decision also services to expand their world outlooks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 148, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20472440945 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00109513564 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0321994741 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.181818182 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3636363636 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259819552267 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935920567718 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559271584992 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141066849236 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269551497669 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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