Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.Do you agree or disagree?Provide relevant examples if necessary.
The amount on the pay cheque is always a priority factor for most of the salaried persons around the globe. It is argued that a handsome amount of salaries are essential instead of job fulfillment. I partially agree with this approach since the importance of money cannot be neglected yet job satisfaction holds its significance as well. I shall elaborate my point of view with valid arguments and examples in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, earning money is a core objective for any salaried person to meet the basic needs of life. People are reluctant to do voluntary work without any reward associated with it. For instance, people working in a packaging factory are only concentrated to receive the money at the end of their work despite the fact that their work is not adding any significant value to the product itself. They find the job hectic and monotonous, yet they are willing to do owing to the monetary benefits attached to it. Thus, monetary compensations take priority over job satisfaction.
In contrast, the importance of job satisfaction cannot be overlooked. Many employees inclined to add value in their work through innovative ideas and utilizing their skillsets. It gives a sense of accomplishment that cannot be achieved through money. Not to forget that job satisfaction is directly proportional to the monetary benefits that come automatically with succession at the workplace. For example, the founder of the Apple, Steve Jobs could have kept working as a regular employee but it was his urge to achieve something bigger that led him to invent apple phones.
In conclusion, I reiterate that money would always be a priority for many, but for some, job fulfillment would be a prime factor. Both factors hold a certain level of significant.
- You and your colleague want to use a company room. Write a letter to your manager and ask for permission.In your letter, you should:•explain why you need that room•describe which room you need and why•tell what changes will need to be done there. 89
- Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and 67
- After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.In your letter:•Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing•Express your appreci 73
- Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people think that an advertising on TV is useless and others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03389830508 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91343261968 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6555818589 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1875 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123285815441 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445124665037 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369910790005 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0737459759209 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402358815527 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.