The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain

Essay topics:

The chart shows the division of household tasks by gender in Great Britain.

The bar chart compares the number of minutes that men and women in Great Britain spend on 6 categories of domestic

chores.

Overall, women spend more time on those tasks than men do. Men spend more minutes per day than women on

gardening/pet care and maintenance/odd jobs, but less time in all other tasks.

Cooking/baking/washing up is the task women spend most of their days on with 74 minutes, compared to 30 minutes for

men. There is also a significant difference in terms of cleaning the house/tidying and care of children/play. Women spend

a daily average of 58 and 45 minutes on those tasks respectively. In contrast, men spend only 13 minutes and 20 minutes

on each of those. In addition, 2 minutes per day are spent by men on clothes/washing/ironing/sewing while women spend

25 minutes each day on this activity.

However, men’s daily involvement in gardening/pet care and maintenance/odd jobs is greater than their female

counterparts’. The figure for maintenance/odd jobs is 49.5 minutes for men and 21 minutes for women. Likewise, men

spend 26 minutes per day on gardening/pet care, in comparison with nearly 10 minutes for women.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: spends
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Suggestion: Chores
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Suggestion: Men
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...men spend only 13 minutes and 20 minutes on each of those. In addition, 2 minutes...
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...washing/ironing/sewing while women spend 25 minutes each day on this activity. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, likewise, so, while, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29473684211 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.82200944958 2.65546596893 144% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5136796128 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4545454545 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 3.83414634146 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0511160028969 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0308443717936 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516865490161 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0276331076806 0.15604864568 18% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523417622764 0.0819641961636 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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