The line graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.
The figure elucidates the amount of visits to two latest music sites on web from the first day to the fifteenth day. At first glance, it is evident that the most noticeable palpitation occurred for the number of pop parade’s visits and it is measured per 1000 visits.
To begin with, there was a remarkable drop in the total of pop parade’s visits in the first seven days in which it stood at just below 120 in day-1 and plunged to well above eighty-fourths in day-7. In the next 2 days, it oscillated gradually approximately to eighty-seconds. Afterwards, it fluctuated dramatically between day-9, which made up at 40, and day-15, which constituted at just over 320 in 2.
In accordance with music choice, day-1 to day-11 witnessed a considerable wave for the amount of visits in music choice in which it, initially, upright positioned roughly at 40 and achieved at just across sixty-thirds in day-11, erratically, it soared highly to 240 in 2 in the following day. Nevertheless, it, additionally, experienced a fluctuation over the next 3 days to finish at well beyond 60 by the end of the period shown.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-22 | NhungNtdghtn | 56 | view |
| 2019-07-19 | SUSANNA PETROSYAN | 11 | view |
| 2019-05-31 | Audric | 11 | view |
| 2019-05-12 | alifdores | 78 | view |
| 2019-05-05 | hoaihoang2801 | 67 | view |
- some people think newspaper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media. 56
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people.Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 67
- Housing and accommodation has become a major problem in many countries around the world.- What are some of the main factors that have contributed to this problem?- What can be done to help reducing the number of homeless people? 78
- Process : Life cycle of the silkworm. 78
- Space exploration requires vast sums of money. Is the amount of money spent on space research justifiable? Could the money be better spent?What is your viewpoint on this issue? Give reasons for your answer. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nevertheless, second, so, third, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87434554974 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1528585413 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596858638743 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.2893090601 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11574196103 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624066655661 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774091585134 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101038135085 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814794435085 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.