A person can achieve success only if he spends each and every moment of his day working towards his goal. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.
In this modern era, people have to work hard to achieve their goals. While, some people argue that people have to work hard everyday and every moment, but some people argue that people should balance their life. On my point of view, I prefer keeping a balance in life, in this essay I shall discuss on the factors in strengthening my arguement.
Firstly, people who have a life goal should work towards achieving it at every possible time they have. For example, those who do higher studies in foreign countries have to earn and carry out their studies at the same time. Moreover, those who have committed towards their goals will benefit the value of their sacrifice in the future.
On the other hand, if a person is dedicated only for a specific goal he will lose attention on other aspects of life. For instance, students have to focus on studies, but at the same time he has to spend some time in physical fitness activities to keep physical fitness which is the key for mental stability. In addition, students need to engage in aesthetic subjects for relaxation. Therefore, students mainly have to balance their student life with extra curricular activities a s well.
In conclusion, it is recommended to keep more attention on person's goal, while balancing relationship with family and the society. If not, that would not creat a better citizen to the society irrespective of the academic achievements. Finally, governments bear the responsibility of creating a society as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ple argue that people have to work hard everyday and every moment, but some people argue...
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Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oint of view, I prefer keeping a balance in life, in this essay I shall discuss o...
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Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t life with extra curricular activities a s well. In conclusion, it is recomme...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...s recommended to keep more attention on persons goal, while balancing relationship with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 252.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66698552515 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3772615819 50.4703680194 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5384615385 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.25397266985 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140796104237 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510344710444 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441736929356 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787165807857 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151374119186 0.0609392437508 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 63.0 Out of 90
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