Nowadays parents give more freedom to their children than in past. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and include relevant example.
These days' people give extra freedom to their kind then in past. Which of some advantage and disadvantage, but I personal believe that disadvantage is more than advantage such as parent given more freedom on using technology which can bad impact on children, another is that parents give permission make more new friend and lot enjoy with mid night.
First one is technology freedom. Nowadays technology freedom is more common in society because techno gauges cheaper than past so parent easily afford for self as well as their children. Parents give opportunity to children using technology them comfort so children over use technology which is harmful them. For example, present time mobile use very common in teenagers. Which use they learn some bad thing such as how to make bomb, how to do Susie, pornography, etc. they use internet making unknown new friend on social media which may good or bad, it is not well for them.
Second one is that are given more freedom with friend. Parents are permitted their children to enjoy with friends up midnight, so children do club party with friends and they may do high-speed drive on bike and car which is not good for them. These type activities create bad impact on their future. For example, some rich people's kind does club party and they use drugs, drink alcohol which are very harm full their health. Some teenager enjoys drive with on bike doing serious accident, which in, they have been serious injured and some time lost the life.
In stark conclusion, I have discuss above two paragraph which can be see, parent's more freedom for their children which is very harm full. Sometimes by techno freedom while sometimes by friendship freedom.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
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Message: Use past participle here: 'discussed'.
Suggestion: discussed
...e life. In stark conclusion, I have discuss above two paragraph which can be see, p...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'paragraph' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'paragraphs'.
Suggestion: paragraphs
...rk conclusion, I have discuss above two paragraph which can be see, parents more freedom ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, then, well, while, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30902516708 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3604575566 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23951850047 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924452890788 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773420017961 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17530010639 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695589321271 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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