Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Thank them for the photos and for the holiday
Explain why you didn't write earlier
Invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Andrew,
Recently, received our photos of the tour! Such a nice international trip! It is the best trip with the friends I have ever had.
First of all, thank you all for the photos and time dedicated to the trip from busy schedules! Without any one of you, we wouldn't be able to enjoy these holidays. Every one of us has an invaluable and equal contribution.
Apologizing for not writing last week because of hectic days! I had loads of backlog because of long sabbatical leaves. Also, need to cover up all the discussions which happened during my absence.
By the way, have you planned about coming to India in the near future? If so, you are cordially invited to crash on my bed. We can enjoy an ideal tent party with campfire and barbeque in my garden or we can also go somewhere near the town for a one-day tour.
Hoping to see you in the near future! Till then enjoy life and work.
Jimmy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...y schedules! Without any one of you, we wouldnt be able to enjoy these holidays. Every ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 751.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49700598802 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36764074267 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.706586826347 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3192065027 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4444444444 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243328270764 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915722468093 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662715477027 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119694484283 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437985358337 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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