Success in today’s society is measure in term of wealthy. To what extent do you agree with this definition of success should society take in to consideration?
In today society every one moving to gain money because for their basic amenities. There is one quote “money makes many thing” This quote explains one who have money he/she can do many things, buy whatever their needs.
According, to the survey of UNO some countries the basic things like medical and education people need to spend money to get. So, people are realising without money they can’t survey and unable to provide good education to his children, here the money play role. Although in some country like Germany providing free education and medical treatment, this is a good development for the nation.
However, money can buy many things but it could not able to buy love, family, knowledge and our live. These all can have done by relationship a true relation can’t break out easily. Even though we all need money to survey a life it was undeniable, always excess money which cause risk.
Most of community people are suffering for money to live, they lending money from neighbourhood, bank or some financial company but the interest rate of lending value is high, anyhow for their requirement they need to do lending. In some case the borrowing person could not able to return they commence in to suicide.
In a nut shell, the money role is more important in life so far need of earning is important to lead.
Government have responsibility provide basic amenities to their people and ensure the welfare for people health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
... need to spend money to get. So, people are realising without money they can't survey an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1207.87684729 101% => OK
No of words: 246.0 242.827586207 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94308943089 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52889965509 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 139.433497537 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577235772358 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 379.143842365 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6648706479 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.333333333 104.977214359 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 7.25397266985 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0545813521734 0.242375264174 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0224324908285 0.0925447433944 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312334713566 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0268211123708 0.151781067708 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375726221505 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 12.6369458128 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.5310837438 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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