You have recently ordered an item on the Internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter:
– describe what you purchased,
– explain why you are not happy with the purchase,
– tell them what you would like them to do about the situation.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with a product I ordered online from your store.
I recently bought a dress for my graduation from your store at www.dressworld.com, the number of order is 8654320 and the model number is 64520. I paid by my credit card online on October, 14 and received the order on October, 25.
There is a problem with the size and color of the dress delivered to me. I filled in my measurements in a special form, and the system suggested that size 8 will be perfectly fit on me. However, after I tried on that dress, I was very disappointed as it was too big for me. Another problem was that the colour of fabric was completely unlike as on the photos from the website.
In order to rectify the situation I will send this dress back and I would like to full refund on my bank account.
I hope this matter will receive your immediate attention.
Thank you in advance for your help in straightening out this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Anna
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| 2019-05-15 | moi_framboise | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... 8654320 and the model number is 64520. I paid by my credit card online on Octobe...
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Line 16, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t this matter. Yours sincerely, Anna
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59116022099 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79296932224 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591160220994 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.684133214 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5454545455 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110885022684 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0428651716836 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038809898925 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0639963149 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040969707968 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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