The charts show how selected age groups purchased concert,cinema and theatre tickets online over first three months of 2006 in three countries and how the internet was accessed.
The given bar graph illustrate that the preferred age group bought tickets of concert, cinema and theatre through internet during the first 3 months of 2006 in three different nation and how they use the internet.
Overall,it is clear that, younger generation choose to book ticket online in Australia and UK meanwhile , highest Malaysian people purchased a ticket through desktop computer compared with two other nation.
First team of year 2006, approximately 55% young commuters of Australia and UK for booking tickets, compared with, only about 40% people used internet. For UK and Malaysia the figure of older people were exactly same at around 40% who access the internet for purchasing tickets that was lower than older people of Australia accounting for 45%.
From the other graph, Personal computer or wired computer was most popular in all three country namely Australia, UK and Malaysia accounting for 55%,60% and 65% respectively. The percentage of laptop user was around 40% that was double than mobile phone user stood at nearly 20%.More than 25% and 40% of dwellers used laptop for booking ticket respectively, which was larger than the figure for mobile phone accounted for 20% and 25% for two nation namely Britain and Malaysia.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'nation' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nations'.
Suggestion: nations
...rst 3 months of 2006 in three different nation and how they use the internet. Overa...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ket online in Australia and UK meanwhile , highest Malaysian people purchased a ti...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the highest'.
Suggestion: , the highest
...ket online in Australia and UK meanwhile , highest Malaysian people purchased a ticket thr...
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Line 3, column 200, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'nation' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nations'.
Suggestion: nations
...esktop computer compared with two other nation. First team of year 2006, approximat...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: More
...n mobile phone user stood at nearly 20%.More than 25% and 40% of dwellers used lapt...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly 20%.More than 25% and 40% of dwellers used laptop for booking ticket respectiv...
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Line 7, column 444, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'nation' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'nations'.
Suggestion: nations
...phone accounted for 20% and 25% for two nation namely Britain and Malaysia.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20792079208 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4991832974 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59900990099 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.8388498561 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.333333333 112.824112599 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.6666666667 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21750458132 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124959385861 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125029748683 0.0843802449381 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16116222788 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139719048844 0.0819641961636 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.