The chart shows the proportion of graduates from Bluesky University in 2006 entering different employer sectors.
The given pie chart illustrates how the proportion of graduates from Bluesky University was distributed to various employment sectors after finishing the university in 2006.
Looking more closely at the data on the chart, the most popular choice of the students was to work in industries service being 33% or one-third of total choices. As next popular sectors were manufacturing industry and education registered with 16.3 % and 14.7% respectively. Moreover, the numbers of students who wanted to work in policy government account for noticeable proportion of choices with 12.1%.
Turning to the least popular choices, 7.8 % graduates chose their career on the art, entertainment and media. Meanwhile, the percentage of students was 5.6 % in civil service. Charity and Sport followed them with tiny fraction showing 0.3% and 0.1% respectively.
Overall, overwhelming, industry and government were the most popular choices among others.
- Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 67
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 73
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 61
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, third, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64539007092 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9883712377 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8416058757 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191912556133 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721471191034 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128165894598 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127012372345 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.163122318116 0.0819641961636 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.06136585366 121% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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