You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Hannah,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to inform you that I have transferred to a new house.
About a year ago, I received a notice that the building of the apartment where I was staying was bought by a local businessman. As soon as I got the advice, I then scouted for new accommodations way before the establishment was pulled down. I am now living in a 3 bedroom, two-storey house with a garage. Apart from that, I also have my own outdoor grilling station in my lawn.
I am planning to throw a Wet n' Wild themed housewarming soiree on the 15th of June. I've customized a program including a variety of games for all my guests. My parents will be flying here to celebrate their anniversary as well and I would be delighted if you can come and see them.
I will be sending an RSVP through email. Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Best regards,
Joyce Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ousewarming soiree on the 15th of June. Ive customized a program including a variet...
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Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... an RSVP through email. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Best regards, Joyc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41916167665 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6976695879 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694610778443 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8288609424 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.5 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9166666667 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151657303678 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537664607532 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720671138845 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111912555446 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104417280174 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 13.2329268293 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 11.4140731707 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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