Is the study of music, art and sport as important for school children as becoming literate and numerate?" Do you agree or disagree.
recently, schools are not confined themselves with studies only nowadays. parents want their children should be performed better in another field also. study as well as other curriculum activites like music,art, and sport have sparked an outgoing controversy whether these activites are required for young generation or not. some people advocate it is a positive development and we should encourage it. however, others are opine to that. I will discuss the controversial aspect throughout the essay.
To commence with, there is a myriad of santce in my favour. however, the most predominated is that children are getting motivated by performing such activities. it is not even required but also become an essential need for the student's growth. For a example, recent study done by the New York university demonstrats that more the 50% of parents want their kids to become like Sachin Tendulekar and Amitabh Bachan around the world. consequently, parents should encourage them and motive them, it will boost the confidence in their studies as well.
On the other hand, some people reject this notion. As per them, it totally wastage of time and money only. children should be focused to their studies only, otherwise such activites can become a cause to distraction. such consequences can be seen in their later part of the life. A salient example, a survey conducted by Sydney university indicates that more than 20% of parents want their kids to focus on study only. Hence, after finishing their studies, they can complete their hobbies as well.
To conculde, I pen down by saying "Every garden has its own weeds". it's totally depende on the parents what they can offer to their adolescents to become successful in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1207.87684729 122% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17253521127 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70863005053 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595070422535 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 379.143842365 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6551724138 150% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2831189559 50.4703680194 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3157894737 104.977214359 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9473684211 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.25397266985 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.33497536946 300% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135925294213 0.242375264174 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375990120636 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454460834138 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829789137185 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472260812114 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.