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incidence of diseases in Someland from 1960 to 1995
The line graph gives information about the incidence of diseases in Someland from 1960 to 1995. It is important to note that despite fluctuating over the period as a whole, the number of X disease fell in Someland.
In 1960, the amount of X disease stood at 100, levelling off at this rate over the following five years. 1965 to 1970 saw a steady increase to 200 in the X disease rate, which was followed by sudden growth at the end of this period, with the rate reaching a peak of 500 in 1975. From 1975 to 1980, there was a level off 500 and then plunged to 350 in 1985.
Next, the figure kept sharply dropping a low of 0 at 1990, levelling off at this number for the remainder of the period
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...opping a low of 0 at 1990, levelling off at this number for the remainder of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 568.0 965.302439024 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 134.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23880597015 4.92477711251 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29598621171 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 160.2 283.868780488 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8928642544 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282550655507 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163470083006 0.103423049105 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.207004879413 0.0843802449381 245% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209783757785 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.22302318115 0.0819641961636 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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