People’s lives are now surrounded by advertisement. This affects what people consider important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertisement is dominating people’s lives now a day. Besides, repeating different ads about new products and services making people to see them all the time. This phenomenon is distorting people perceptive on life. I completely agree with the statement of some people that it has negative impact on everyone’s live.
Admittedly, advertisement has certain benefits in modern live. First of all, a piece of information on television or internet means to introduce new useful things to people. In addition, it saves everyone time to look for new things and can help people to find out how much they should spend. Moreover, this would also help community to choose what is best for them. Furthermore, people also see ads as a source of entertainment because now a day they add lots of funny things between the advertisements to make people to addict to them.
However, I believe that increasing use of advertisements on different sources such as television, internet and radio affecting people’s perceptive on life, what is important for them. One of the consequences is the more ads people see on television the more things they desire to buy. Even though they do not need them but still some men and women spend money on different things as a result they are wasting lot of money. Secondly, it also becomes a symbol of high status between some youngsters to buy products which are popular in these days.
In conclusion, although advertisements introduces so many benefits to its audience but still increasing use of ads can impact negatively on people’s live. So everyone should always try to spend on their necessities first rather than on luxury items.
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| 2020-06-27 | sheetal340 | 84 | view |
| 2021-10-23 | Vivek chovatiya | 78 | view |
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- For school children, their teachers have more influence on their intelligence and social development than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1403.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03612595367 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56884057971 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9269401144 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309991658999 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116238400867 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105341533032 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206294731842 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100519471748 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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