Even though doctors all over the world agree that fast food is bad for people health,more and more people eating it.why are more people eating fast food? What can be done about this problem?
No issue in recent years has drown as much attention as the debate surrounding people health. Doctors have, these days, shown concern on the dire consequences of increase consumption of fast food. This essay elaborate on how to discourage people from eating fast food?
Despite doctors have said about bad effect on people health, it seems that more humans eat this type of food. Indeed, "Fast Food" means is easily available and take get quickly. In addition, junk food changed peoples' lifestyle and the method of their life. One point which I believe to be absolutely pivotal is the fact that the life is very rapid and most of the people have no time to making food. Moreover, junk food not only have very good and delicious taste, but also is very affordability. Therefore, the number of these restaurants is increasing by offering a variety of colorful foods throughout the world for attract the people. For instance, New York has a numerous fast food in all corner of the city and they have cooked all types of pizza, sandwiches, fried and so on. Hence, according to the above reasons, we can observe that why people resort to eat fast food.
The government play a vital role in solving this problem. Some measures are suggested to mitigate the solution. One effective solution is to impose hefty taxes on this type of restaurant. Thus, followed by, food prices are rising and people's willingness to buy is reduced. More importantly, propagation via various means of media along with optional courses about the disadvantages of consumption junk food. In fact, the government should raise public awareness about detrimental effect of fast food on the health of the body.
In conclusion, fast food, regardless of its advantages, has become a prominent concern in the peoples' health for a number of reasons, and the government should take immediate actions to limit this situation and reduce the consumption of fast food into the doctor's remarks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'drowned'.
Suggestion: drowned
No issue in recent years has drown as much attention as the debate surroun...
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Line 2, column 676, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[5]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'numerous fast food'.
Suggestion: numerous fast food
... the people. For instance, New York has a numerous fast food in all corner of the city and they have...
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Line 4, column 95, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
..., has become a prominent concern in the peoples health for a number of reasons, and the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98475609756 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.665629872 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588414634146 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.455942825 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.483048021585 0.244688304435 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142825149953 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100913781019 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296031945967 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685394792761 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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