The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Given is the diagram revealing the process of producing bricks serving for building major.
Overall, it can be seen from the process that there are seven stages to form bricks, beginning with digging up of clay and ending with delivering bricks.
At the first stage, the clay is dug up from the ground by an excavator, and then this is put into the metal grid in order to grind them smaller on the roller. At the stage three, these pieces are to be mixed by sand and water and turn into bricks by either placing in mould or wire cutter.
At the fourth stage of the process, they are let into the oven aiming at drying for 24-48 hours. Following that the bricks are followed by a heating and cooling system. This step shows the moderate and high temperature needed in a kiln and after that, they are gone through a chamber to cool down lasting for three to four days. Finally, bricks are packaged and delivered to where they are used.
- The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities. 84
- It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The table shows the average annual percentages of water pollution in four large cities in 2003 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 90
- The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children's health. 84
- The graph below shows the amounts spent on apparel on the Internet in the USA and Japan between 1999 and 2003 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er placing in mould or wire cutter. At the fourth stage of the process, they a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49418604651 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09885331437 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633720930233 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7012857404 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177066622098 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874181556779 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106295097222 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13561007088 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1349069791 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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