Some people think that planning for future is a waste of time. They believe it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent agree or disagree.
It is widely argued that people should concentrate on the present instead of arranging for the following time. Personally, although I strongly agree with this first view, but I still believe that planning for future is necessary for them.
In the one hand, people should pay attention to present work based on two major reasons. Firstly, they have to focus on the present in order to complete their work by the best way. As far as I know, conducting definitely is not easy like the way they imagined, it includes numerous bitterness or hardship. Instead of planning for future, they need to get great attempt to conduct perfectly. For instance, if you are a student, you should study hard in order to attain good consequence and extend your knowledge, but not nervous about finding a job. According to the newest report, 70% adolescents yearly find a job in the early time to make profit. Hence, they always play truant to have time to other works. Moreover, planning for future is creating a pressure for them, even reducing happiness at now. For instance, Beltant Swan- famous billionaire in the world used to admit to the hospital due to depression. She suffered from pressure from worker life or company in the future making her exhausted absolutely.
In the other hand, I also assume that people need to prepare for the future to motivate themselves. Actually, if they only focus on job at now, they will lose their dynamic. For example, Bill gates is successful thanks to strategy which is created when he were a college student. Thus, people should plan the most accurately in order to make progress for them.
In conclusion, I think that people should combine between present works and plan in the future correctly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...works and plan in the future correctly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86779661017 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53842405197 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.824242893 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.4705882353 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320358072582 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992976039959 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603612284119 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219839619449 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308431549598 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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