Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The author points out that declining population in deer is the result of their being unable to follow age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea. To buttresses his/her argument, the author cites the following evidence: first, Arctic deer need to limit their habitats to both warm and cold areas by migration; second, the reports local hunters and recent global warming trends show that the deer populations are decreasing. Tough the issue pointed have its merit, because of lack of relevant evidence and unaddressed assumptions, the author's argument is unsubstantiated and flawed.
To begin with, the creditability of the reports by local hunters is questionable. It is possible the hunters mistakenly count the number of deer in the warm areas when a mass of deer actually live in cold areas. The population of deer calculated this way is unwarranted. It is overhunting that results to the dwindled population of deer, instead of global warming. The untested report by local hunter, hence, does not give strong evidence to support the variation in local environment.
In addition, the author unfairly assumes that the recent global warming trend takes place in the Arctic. The assumption seems valid at first glance. Careful investigation curtails the validity of assumption since global trend does not necessarily apply to this specific area. If the temperature of arctic goes up, then it is possible that the migration of deer will be affected, thus supporting the author’s argument. If, nonetheless, the temperature goes down in this particular area, we may indicate that there is no direct relationship between the declining deer and global warming trend.
Moreover, the change in climate patterns does not necessarily lead to the decline in deer population. Features and living habitats would evolve according to their surroundings. Even if the climate has changed, deer may remain stable because they may adapt themselves to the new weather by certain means. Almost all deer are able to survive, as a result, due to their adaptability to environment.
Last but not least, the author mistakenly ascribes the shrinking deer population in Arctic to their inability to follow their traditional migration patterns crossing the frozen sea. He/she fails to consider many other factors leading to its dwindling. Say, for example, that deer cannot obtain enough food, for which plants that used to feed on are extinct. Deer suffered from hunger owing to lack of enough food for survival. Inconclusive explanations for the declining trend in deer makes the author's argument problematic.
To sum up, as it stands, the author's conclusion is based on several invalid assumptions which undermines its reliability. To further strengthen his/her argument, the author is suggested to include the evidences as follows: first, the evidence of dwindling deer must be gathered by methodical and scientific investigation carried out by professional experts; second, global warming also applies in Arctic; finally, the impact of migration patter is the only impact on variation in population of deer.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 490 350
No. of Characters: 2541 1500
No. of Different Words: 244 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.705 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.186 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.791 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 198 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 145 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 105 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 66 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.417 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.958 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.625 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.297 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.532 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.099 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...argument is unsubstantiated and flawed. To begin with, the creditability of t...
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...port the variation in local environment. In addition, the author unfairly ass...
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...ning deer and global warming trend. Moreover, the change in climate patterns...
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...o their adaptability to environment. Last but not least, the author mistakenl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, hence, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, second, so, then, thus, for example, in addition, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 28.8173652695 115% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 55.5748502994 130% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 16.3942115768 177% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2633.0 2260.96107784 116% => OK
No of words: 488.0 441.139720559 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39549180328 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90126812366 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 204.123752495 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526639344262 0.468620217663 112% => OK
syllable_count: 798.3 705.55239521 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 16.0 8.76447105788 183% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.9764172123 57.8364921388 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.47826087 119.503703932 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2173913043 23.324526521 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08695652174 5.70786347227 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.25449101796 152% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.67664670659 192% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197470637298 0.218282227539 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0593031939607 0.0743258471296 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526298407502 0.0701772020484 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10675950408 0.128457276422 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438217559227 0.0628817314937 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.5979740519 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32208582834 109% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 98.500998004 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.