Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
children’s behaviour education is debatable. While some people assume that competitive characteristics should be stimulated in children, others think that they should be taught cooperation rather than competition to be more compatible when children grow up.this essay will discuss both sides of the argument in detail, before the writer’s perspective is given.
Teaching children to compete can be immensely beneficials. The main advantage of rivalry is to encourage children to do their best. this is because youth will compare themselves with their friends. More specifically, they will try their best to achieve the goals that have been set. Moreover, competition is a skill which is needed for their future life. many young people will work in innovative corporation, such as Facebook or Google which embrace spirit of competition in working environment.
Despite these considerations, cooperation is an essential part of everyday life. Firstly, collaboration is vital to success in many areas of life. Especially, team sports require high spirit of working together, and many failures are caused by poor teamwork. In addition, our daily life depends on the ability of getting on well and communicating with people. competitive person tend to not communicate effectively with people, so they will not gain useful knowledge from their workmates.
In conclusion, after analysing both sides of the argument, i think that competition has more positive effects on children. this is because it will help them more motivated and prepare for every struggle in their future life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58436213992 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07433574065 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650205761317 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 63.6320673874 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134245133622 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406092631598 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584756723458 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889110637559 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732513376331 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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