Some people believe that computers and internet carry more weight than traditional education in children’s study. Some others believe that traditional schooling and teachers are still essential and more effective. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion.
there is a heated debate on whether computers play a more important role than traditional education in modern education. because both of them have eccentric advantages, I think offering a combination of these two approaches will benefit students more than any method does solely.
On the one hand computers can improve teaching effects. because of the easy access to numerous educational resources, using computers in children education has the potential to make a lesson more specific and vivid, which can prevent confusion and monotony. For instance, when encountering three-dimensional geometry problems, most students find it hard for them to figure out the complex relationships between edges and faces. However, under the facilitation of some mathematics software, these relationships can be illustrated quite clearly, with only minor easy operation. Therefore, making full use of computer resources will increase study efficiency of students.
On the other hand, traditional education is still indispensable. Firstly, teaching students in a traditional way is effective and flexible. After classes, teachers can provide pertinent directions to pupils with certain questions. Secondly, a highly skilled teacher with powerful charisma can not only stir up students’ interests in certain subject but also offer life experience and beneficial advices to his/her students. Finally, traditional education allows pupils to cultivate social abilities by holding public events such as speech competition, which is extremely useful in their incoming working lives.
In my view, because there are no serious conflicts between computer education and tradition, I believe a teaching approach mixed these two different ways is more suitable to modern society.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-05-22 | Wang Changqing | 84 | view |
| 2018-07-11 | danieltseng06 | 84 | view |
- Some people think that teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subjects they are best at or they are most interested in. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially supported by government. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion. 73
- The international community must act immediately to ensure all nations to reduce their consumption of fossil fuels e.g. gas and oil. 11
- Some people think that teenagers should concentrate on all subjects at school. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subjects they are best at or they are most interested in. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- Some people believe that computers and internet carry more weight than traditional education in children’s study. Some others believe that traditional schooling and teachers are still essential and more effective. Discuss the both viewpoints and give yo 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
there is a heated debate on whether computers...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...ditional education in modern education. because both of them have eccentric advantages,...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...computers can improve teaching effects. because of the easy access to numerous educatio...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a traditional way" with adverb for "traditional"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...dispensable. Firstly, teaching students in a traditional way is effective and flexible. After classe...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for instance, i think, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85658914729 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07460125646 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686046511628 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7345294601 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.230769231 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225631719373 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779980748713 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643695784156 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129499828731 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301337640762 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.