You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.
Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
tell him/her when you think you could start
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in response to the advertisement for the part-time job published in "The Guardian" newspaper at your club. I am in the 3rd year of graduation. My family consists of 4 people, father, mother, sister and I. As there is a shortage of funds for expenses, I want to join a temporary work profile to help the family.
Before graduation, I have had assisted the Sports Arena in Barcelona. I gained 2 years of experience in managing and organizing competitive games in the sector. I possess excellent communication and office administration skills.
I can join the organization in the coming week.
Looking forward to hear from you.
Yours truly,
Shubham Gupta
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tion and office administration skills. I can join the organization in the coming...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
... in the coming week. Looking forward to hear from you. Yours truly, Shubham Gupt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 595.0 937.175257732 63% => OK
No of words: 117.0 206.0 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08547008547 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28886816799 3.78020617076 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.191137556 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 127.690721649 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.735042735043 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 290.88556701 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0534748708 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.5 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 4.34317383033 9% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178536370728 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487840602232 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712422443154 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897589031136 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781999614197 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.06 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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