Some people prefer to live in the city while others are more comfortable in the countryside.
Why do you think some people have a preference?
Are there particular ages when living in the city or the country suit better?
there are some people who like live in countryside because of its quiet and slow rhythm lifestyle , while others prefer city more for its convenience . In my opinion, due to where to live , different people has different reasons . This essay will discuss more details about it as well as whether ages influences where to live .
there are a numerous of reasons that people have a different preference about in choosing living environment , such as job opportunities , housing price , education sources and so on . Of course , everyone hopes there is a place with great public service like great schools , hospitals and lower price of houses and a lot of great work positions with high salary and benefits, but it is too good to be true .Compare with living in big cities where can enjoy excellent modern life, living countryside means less pressure and peaceful life. people choose their prefer one according to their priorities. For example, if one who values nature more , he will live in countryside .
I think there are some periods of life , it will be better to live in the city than country. For instance , it will be beneficial for students who live in cities , because of the privilege of high standard of eduction . in China, almost all famous universities are in the cities . if you want to get high eduction, it will be better to go to city. At the same time, for elder people, countryside will be a paradise for retirement : less pressure , more fresh air .
In conclusion, city or countryside , it all depends on personal choose .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, of course, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86590038314 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66669043003 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570881226054 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.8940714545 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6923076923 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317370855289 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117620088682 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791200582039 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183700681391 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886343908568 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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