Nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost every day of the week in many countries. Is it a positive or negative development for shoppers and local community?

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Nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost every day of the week in many countries. Is it a positive or negative development for shoppers and local community?

One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that nowadays shops have extended opening hours almost every day of the week in many countries. There is a widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.

There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that opening hours of shops can not only contribute to every day of the week in many countries but also lead to numerous other benefits in various fields. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective , but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives, with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand one in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.

Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned preposition is that it is likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas. Besides, only when one follows such a system, can they broaden their horizons, thus learning such essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance. Hence, it is apparent why many are in favour of increasing opening hours of shops every day of the week in many countries.

In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that the benefit of increasing opening hours of shops every day of the week are indeed too great to ignore.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to everyday'?
Suggestion: to everyday
... hours of shops can not only contribute to every day of the week in many countries but also ...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...it more when it comes to being effective , but they can also enhance the productiv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 270.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84814814815 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75085754302 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522222222222 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 379.143842365 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2928716069 50.4703680194 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258249722247 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105493289346 0.0925447433944 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149598176954 0.071462118173 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173440991771 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496772602017 0.0609392437508 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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