You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company that shipped the equipment.
In your letter
Describe the problem with the equipment
Explain how this problem is affecting your work
Say what the shop or company to do
Dear sir/ Madam
I am writing this letter to inform you about the issue on the equipment which has been shipped by your company on last week
let me explain the situation in more details. For your background information. Couple of weeks back, i approached your help desk regarding the equipment named Wireless internet router. however i received the same through courier on my mailing address and performed installation as per manual guidance on last sunday. it worked perfectly on that day. On the very next day, i was trying to connect my laptop with that equipment it was failing to connect and moreover there was no proper signal from that equipment. approached the helpdesk and they tried to resolve it remotely but no luck. I got frustrated with the defected equipment,because it affected my work too.am sending back the equipment to you, because am not happy with you service.
Could you please consider this as high priority and the get the equipment repaired.it will be great if i get my refund for the same however i can't wait for an another week.
please let me know your update via email or call me back @9710278725 .
Your's faithfully
Sridhar Ayyalu
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-07-25 | vaishali saral | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-25 | vaishali saral | 70 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear sir/ Madam I am writing this letter to inform you a...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ound information. Couple of weeks back, i approached your help desk regarding the...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...uipment named Wireless internet router. however i received the same through courier on ...
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Suggestion: however,
...uipment named Wireless internet router. however i received the same through courier on ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...named Wireless internet router. however i received the same through courier on my...
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... as per manual guidance on last sunday. it worked perfectly on that day. On the ve...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ctly on that day. On the very next day, i was trying to connect my laptop with th...
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Suggestion: Approached
...s no proper signal from that equipment. approached the helpdesk and they tried to resolve ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , because
...t frustrated with the defected equipment,because it affected my work too.am sending back...
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Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
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...uipment,because it affected my work too.am sending back the equipment to you, beca...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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... equipment repaired.it will be great if i get my refund for the same however i ca...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...if i get my refund for the same however i cant wait for an another week. please ...
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Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... i get my refund for the same however i cant wait for an another week. please let m...
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Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a week' or 'another week'.
Suggestion: a week; another week
...nd for the same however i cant wait for an another week. please let me know your update via em...
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...wever i cant wait for an another week. please let me know your update via email or ca...
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...te via email or call me back @9710278725 . Yours faithfully Sridhar Ayyalu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours faithfully Sridhar Ayyalu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1003.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.015 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66778954602 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8023978076 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1818181818 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260299481459 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922750603273 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651672785029 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142228604458 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687759407278 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.