A motorway is to be built near your house. As you think that is will destroy areas of natural beauty.
Write a letter to the local authorities. In your letter
• Express your views
• Explain what damage will be caused
• Suggest alternative routes
Dear sir,
I am Daniel, resident of Greenwich avenue and senior member of society welfare association. This morning, I read about your motorway construction plan in the local newspaper article. I am writing this letter to express my concern about the same and request you to alter the route.
First of all, I would like to thank you on behalf of all the residents for considering about the development of our society. But unfortunately this highway would not be much beneficial as we already have an underground route towards same destination. Moreover, this construction would demolish the central park and local sports center of our area. Both these amenities have become a necessity of the society people. People of all age group from toddlers to elderly people are regular visitors of central part and the sports centre is only the stress-reliever place of the young children and adults.
You could consider the alternative route plan from the opposite lane to the providence bus stop, which would not affect us by any way. Also the other route would benefit not only us but also some other nearby localities.
I hope you will consider our concern seriously and choose the alternative route for the motor way development.
Yours Sincerely
Daniel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lace of the young children and adults. You could consider the alternative route...
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Line 6, column 136, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
..., which would not affect us by any way. Also the other route would benefit not only ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1059.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09134615385 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73418242137 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629807692308 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0247664859 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.25 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158684992482 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586821547788 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524023347829 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086310144268 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035584494606 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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