Some people say it is manufacturers and supermarket's responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of products they sell and others say it is the consumers responsibility to avoid buying
products with too much packaging
The usage of packed products has increased excessively in last few years, which has made it an issue of concern. However, according to some people manufacturing of packed products should be minimized by industrialists and limits need to be imposed on selling of such items in city centers, while others assist the buyers to minimize the consumption of these products. This essay will focus on both the views and will state my opinion that usage of over packaged products can be reduced only by decreasing the quantity of its production and sale.
On the one hand, it is evident that the manufacturers and supermarkets are the roots for the generation of products with heavy coating of plastic packaging. The non-biodegradable materials are generally used for packaging the products, consequently, excessive usage of such products can degrade the environment and can affect the health of individuals. Therefore, by reducing the quantity of production the detrimental effects of packed products can be minimize to large
extent. Moreover, the cost of providing layered covering to products is quite high, for that reason, manufacturers can use recycled paper for packaging. Also, it is the responsibility of shopping centers to approve the products with minimal plastic covering to sell in the centers. For instance, in China government has passed a bill according to which industrialists are obliged to pack the products with recycled materials, this has reduced the usage of plastic.
On the other hand, it is also the responsibility of consumers to be aware of the harmful effects of packed products and should limit its consumption. The food items can contaminate by reacting with toxic plastic materials. Additionally, the contaminated food can cause serious health problems and can disturb the healthy life of buyers. For example, the scientific research has proven that the consumption of milk in packed plastic bottles, after three days of packaging can cause food poisoning. As a result, it is quite necessary to avoid consumption of packed products considering its detrimental effects on health.
Finally, in my opinion the reduction in use of products with over packaging by buyers is required but to reduce the amount of manufacturing and selling is much more important to limit its complete usage. To exemplify, UK government has imposed high taxes on the production of plastic packaging, which has reduced its production and marketing. Thus, it is clear that actions taken at manufacturers and supermarkets end play a key role in tackling the issue.
In conclusion, it can be stated that in order to have fresh environment and healthy body a collaborative effort need to be taken by industrialists and individuals to curb the use of over packed products. Although the supreme responsibility lies on the shoulders of manufacturers and shopping centers, as they hold the power to limit the supply of plastic items, so that buyers can never consume them. In near future, it will definitely become an urgent need for the government to pass some laws to limit the use of plastic packaging.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'hold'
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...facturers and shopping centers, as they holds the power to limit the supply of plasti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 86.0 41.998997996 205% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2615.0 1615.20841683 162% => OK
No of words: 501.0 315.596192385 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21956087824 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07777829484 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449101796407 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 817.2 506.74238477 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.929077023 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.05 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231332116196 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768165705518 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537435796277 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132822783483 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414473250951 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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