Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
People’s opinions differ as to whether or not parents of students attending private schools still need to contribute to public schools through taxes. While some argue that it is fair for those parents not to pay the taxes, I firmly believe that state schools should be supported by all members of society.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people claim that the taxes needed to be reduced for families whose offsprings study at non-public schools. Firstly, as families of private school students do not use the service of the public education system, they are not required to pay for it. For example, people do not pay for health insurance because they have personal doctors. Secondly, since they pay more than others do for the tuition fees of their students, the taxes are an unnecessary burden on them. If students from private schools and public schools paid the same amount of money, their families would agree to pay the same taxes.
On the other hand, I support the view that we should all be happy to pay our share of the money that supports the state schools. First, a high-quality education system is important to the development of a country. This leads to a well-educated workforce and a competitive labor market. For instance, even Singapore is a small country, its economy is highly ranked thanks to its well-developed school system. Furthermore, everyone pays the same amount of money for public services such as healthcare or infrastructure. If people just pay only for services that they used, the taxes might not be enough for maintaining necessary public services.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that all of us need to support the system of state education no matter where our children study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: WHETHER[4]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; whether or not; as to whether
People's opinions differ as to whether or not parents of students attending private s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92857142857 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68232810746 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554421768707 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3704190597 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.5 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290094229891 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105771531579 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612875957277 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173551697527 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401585909801 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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