People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on an individually and on society?
In recent years, the individuals who live in some countries have been witnessing lack of sleeping hours compared to their peers in the past. This essay will elaborate on the reasons behind the tendency and explore the main effects associated with this issue.
The first and perhaps the most significant reason is that people try to earn much more money in order to satisfy their primary and secondary requirements. There is an increase in their needs so that they give effort to find money which can fulfill their material life in return for reducing sleeping hours. For instance, some people may engage in additional work at night to reach extra money. Another possible reason may be people crave to relax much via going to the nightclubs or having a chat with their acquaintances on internet at night. Nowadays so many recreational facilities are introduced to individuals and there are abundant sites on internet to communicate.
Looking more closely at the effects obtained from this matter, firstly, by sleeping insufficiently, people might face up inattentiveness. As a result of this, they cannot accumulate their concentrations on daily tasks or adopting a resolution. Secondly, individuals who are unsatisfied their sleeping hours regularly to grow old quickly. Since it causes to break not only the working system of brain but also influence other people’s organisms. Finally, the people who suffer inadequate sleeping become aggressor, angry and spiteful.
Taking everything into consideration, nowadays it is common among people to not sleep enough due to financial or personal reasons. In turn, this trend appears some downsides which aforementioned above in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'breaking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: breaking
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33707865169 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94364867842 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65543071161 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.3654154364 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.785714286 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215255186771 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732725119405 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451269367499 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126647183809 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389081019449 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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