Some people say taxes should be spent on health care. Other people say that there are more important priorities for tax-payers' money. Discus both these views and give your own opinion.
Government has moral responsiblity to provide best facilities for betterment of people. A recent decade are witness of development in government economy. Amid the development there is one phenomenon that has associated with it. In order to this phenomenon some facilities of people argue that local authorities should spend the money on health care facilities while other advocate that other vital facilities need improvement for making good livelihood for society. I will try to throw light upon both opinion of expenditure of taxes. I also try to posit my perspective about it.
To commence with, there are multifarious reason to shore those people who are in favor of spending taxes on health improvement of public. First and foremost, government should give more focus on health care department. As well as people are suffered from hazardous disease like cancer, blood pressure or heart attack. So, they need to take medicine regularly and this treatment is more expensive than they expect. Hence, government should cater the mediclaim facilities for people to support their medical expenditure. As health is pivotal reason for human and healthy population can make future generation productive or creative, local authority has moral responsiblity to offer indigenous people for health insurance at very minimal rate.
On the other side of spectrum, health care is not only vital factor for making betterment of future but also government should consider some other cause like campaigns to raise the awareness among people about deteriorated environment and using public transport instead of private cars. In addition government should improve the public transport with making it convenient and flexible, with taking this help they ought to decline the fare of public transport last but not the least, renewable energy instruments has great advantages and it should be helped by government for instance, Indian government offer the subsidy to set up solar panel at the roof of house which is enormous step to make air clean and clear. Because solar panel used renewable source of sun and it is eco-friendly.
Aggelomerating, all the point I elaborated an above, it can be concluded that money which is collect through taxes, it has not been allocated only on health care department, as there is plethora responsibility for local authorities which need fund for betterment of that sector. That is why, I support those declaration which has needed revenue such as education sector which is crucial for improving the creativity or productivity among people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the best'.
Suggestion: provide the best
Government has moral responsiblity to provide best facilities for betterment of people. A ...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...c transport instead of private cars. In addition government should improve the public tr...
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Line 7, column 303, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this declaration' or 'those declarations'?
Suggestion: this declaration; those declarations
... of that sector. That is why, I support those declaration which has needed revenue such as educat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2162.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32512315271 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85379879042 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544334975369 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.642693317 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.176470588 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8823529412 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228883018612 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692829243464 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609151720745 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137650940561 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536901772337 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.