“pets should be treated like a family member”
Do you agree or disagree?
Yes, I do agree with the statement. Pets should be treated like a family member. according to me, pets like dogs and cats are the most loved ones and caring animals for human being. Both are the creation of god and both need love and affection Basically, pets are stress busters. Just by their presence we won’t feel lonely. In my point of view pets are great creatures and worth many thanks . so it is fair for us to treat them like a family member.
Dogs are the most cutest thing that exist .if you get too much attached to them , they’ll never stop loving you. many people live alone these days. So they need to overcome their loneliness. that’s the most advantage of keeping pets, you definitely won’t feel lonely. Pets can be entertainer and natural babysitter for kids. Take my younger siblings for example if they literally have nothing to do or they are bored ,going outside and playing with neighbour’s dog will give them good mood.
In fact, i had two German Shepherds, one is blonde named Bairley and other one is black named Rio. They were the best pets i had ever had .Just by taking them to morning walk will lessen the stress and that’s healthy for us too. And i also agree with fact that street dogs may cause some viral disease for us. that’s why government provided us blue cross . The work of blue cross is to maintain the street dogs with anti-rabies vaccines and Injections which will prevent and reduce human deaths due to rabies.
Animals are also like human being. The only difference between a human being and a animal is humans can speak but the animals can’t. generally, dogs are good companion to blind people. They are good guiders for them. They can mostly depend on their pets. those dogs have good sense of abilities and can be very helpful for their masters.
In conclusion, i would say pets should be treated like a family member. They should be given proper food,clothing and shelter. In return they are very helpful and loyal. It is our duty that they should be treated well in homes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67307692308 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39748883022 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5516652794 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.75 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.32142857143 5.45110844103 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361943354804 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100770488608 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124109762983 0.0737576698707 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211259573908 0.150856017488 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118172705418 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.