Many people try to look younger than their age. What are reasons people do this? Do think this is a good thing or bad thing?
In the contemporary society, it has become more and more popular among individuals to give an effort in order to look younger compared to their age. In this essay, I will elaborate on the reasons behind the tendency and I will demonstrate positive points which belong to this trend.
To begin with, the first and perhaps the most significant reason is current workplaces need the people who have younger looks and well-formed employees rather than old ones. In order to find the work easily at convenience organizations, job hopers tend to try to change their appearance to looking younger age. Another possible reason is individuals crave to be owner of more attention among people. For this reason, they can attract somebody’s attention much more by rejuvenation. For example, women always devote their time on looking younger to be beloved their husbands.
In my opinion, looking younger demonstrates beneficial character for people. Firstly, it assist to find good job, admittedly, employers look for young individuals to give a work. For example, the field of service such as reception at organization, stewardess and others need younger employees than aged people. Secondly, people do some sport activities in order to be slim so it strengthens their health. Finally, by looking young, people might be beautiful or slim and these kinds of people are encouraged to do work efficiently.
Taking everything into consideration, there are a number of reasons for being younger among people and from my standpoint, it can bring useful contribution to their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'assists'?
Suggestion: assists
...icial character for people. Firstly, it assist to find good job, admittedly, employers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23412698413 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93707362634 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1930427685 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.461538462 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317902437264 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107383007368 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423693047832 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184903231591 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461308722789 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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