Individuals today have more information about health than at any time in the past. Yet, people are increasingly suffering from fitness and diet related diseases. Why is this happening? What can be done to prevent it?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is the colossal upsurge in the fact that even though individuals today have more information about health than at any time in the past, they are increasingly suffering from fitness and diet related diseases. There are various factors that aids to this and I will be scrutinizing each one of those throughout this essay.
There are a plethora of reasons that accounts for its soaring concern. The most preponderant one is the fact that the obesity rate of the working population has shot up more than 20 percent over the past few years according to the journal published by The Deccan Chronicle. The hazardous food habits, negligence on the importance of healthy diet and personal fitness are the major factors that accounts to this. Today’s population depend much more on street and junk foods than healthy intake. The act of having proper and timely breakfast has become extinct. Most peoples usually take food on the way or in the middle of work which makes them not to properly chew the food that they eat.
Taking care of a bunch of factors can effectively change the prevailing situation. Proper care should be given for the timely and healthy meals. The molding should start from the children where they should be taught to eat properly and concentrate on the food that they eat. The practice followed by Japan can be taken as an example here. There should be a dedicated time for some physical exercise, be it cycling, walking or hitting the gym.
To summarize, with proper measures and habits and making use of the information that we have, it is possible to build up a stronger generation with less people suffering from fitness and diet related diseases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... to build up a stronger generation with less people suffering from fitness and diet ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87118644068 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56893245561 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562711864407 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3417140043 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.642857143 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.142857142857 7.25397266985 2% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34838186459 0.242375264174 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987458255063 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113187372291 0.071462118173 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217020548226 0.151781067708 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133009232394 0.0609392437508 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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