Nowadays people are increasingly dependent on their smart phones. Is this a positive trend? what are the advantages or disadvantagesof this dependency? Support with examples from your own experience or observations.
This world became “Global Village” when the Internet started to rule this world as part of Information era. Internet did not restrict itself within a desktop computer or a laptop computer, it even went depth and became a part in mobile phones and tablets as well. Recent years, smart phone become a fame to those who use it for variety of reasons like official, gaming, entertainment etc., This essay will detail both the advantage and disadvantage of consuming smart phones.
Nearly twenty years before, passing information from one place to another was only possible few mediums like telegraphs, letters, phone calls. Apart from telephone, other form of communication ends up in delays when the communication was between countries. When Internet evolved it sorted out lot of issues in communication delay and resulted in a threat of broadcasting data that needs readers discretion. Before arriving to a solution of this problem, mobile phones evolved from a basic version to smart version, therefore resulted in a global threat called phone addiction. Even a middle or lower middle-class people are ready to afford a smart phone to enjoy its usage.
One can have the whole world inside his smart phone as it got such advanced features. Though they have more advantages it equal has disadvantages like addiction, misusing of technology to hack others phone and so on. Regardless of it disadvantage, the need of smart phone is in spike mode over last five years and that concludes the dependency the smart
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, well, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12903225806 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83787331888 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637096774194 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.578328312 50.4703680194 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.636363636 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 20.9669160288 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 7.25397266985 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142948280426 0.242375264174 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514130316171 0.0925447433944 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423242379757 0.071462118173 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949539401538 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192338995407 0.0609392437508 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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