People’s lives are now surrounded by advertisement. This affects what people consider important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, people’s lives are bombarded with different kinds of advertisement . There is an argument that it has a considerable negative impact on people’s metrics of what is important. However, I personally believe the advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
The main side effect of advertisement, people worry, is misleading its customers for things that are trivial in lives, such as luxurious accessories and experience clothes. Those companies advertise everyday in the most obvious billboards in cities to show off their designs, persuading people that only the ones who process those items can be called in good life or fashion. This type of misleading advertisement attract its audiences to focus on less important things in lives. As a result, money is wasted and lives has not improved.
However, it does not mean that all the advertisement fall into this category. For example, the company Nike has advertised its products with one of the most famous slogan “Just Do It!”, motivating thousands and hundreds of people to work out and consider their personal health. Furthermore, there is no doubt that advertisement is essential in people’s daily lives. People are surrounded by uncountable products in the market and advertisement is an efficient way to help people to find right products they need. It’s because that those advertisement not only help people to locate the products, but also introduce the main charing qualities of the product to its customers.
In conclusion, although some advertisement has the negative influence on people’s views towards lives, I personally believe that it has more positive impacts.
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Suggestion: .
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
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Message: Did you mean 'this advertisement' or 'those advertisements'?
Suggestion: this advertisement; those advertisements
...ducts they need. It's because that those advertisement not only help people to locate the prod...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58203125 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20389209021 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60546875 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7253997934 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.923076923 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361560671241 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135012141278 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0915934288827 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228255742436 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685198121414 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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