You normally travel to work by train, but the railway timetable has been changed and the train you usually took no longer stops at your station. Write a letter to the railway authotities. In your letter
Introduce yourself and say how you used to travel by train
Describe the problems the new timetable causes you
Say what you want the railway authorities to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to the new train schedule. I am one of the residences in the village located north of the city. I used the train number four daily in order that I can go to my work office Because it stopped just near the office building and its time was fine with me. However, the train’s new timetable has changed, and it does not stop at our neighborhood station.
This change caused some plights for me and others. Firstly, if I want to use the old train, I have to drive 30 minutes to another station, and it causes wasting money and time. In another hand, provided that I wait for that train in our station, I will arrive late for my works.
As spoke to most of the inhabitants, I knew that this new timetable causes similar problems for all individual. So, I would be extremely grateful if it could be possible for you to address all these concerns and edit this plan. On behalf of all the inhabitants, I would like to thank you for your help.
Kind regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34574468085 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42209419506 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627659574468 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4271744649 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187798214737 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063487094829 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481615289343 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113247639226 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267884533684 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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