Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best
route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job
straight after school. Discuss both views
While some people presume that high school’s students should look for a job immediately after graduation, others think that learners have to study continuously at university to obtain a better career. Both viewpoints have their own benefits.
On the one hand, students will have two advantages if they choose to find a job straight after school. Firstly, because of working earlier in workplaces, they acquire more useful experience which is crucial for them to live in communities. Therefore, they not only can broaden their relationship but also solve the problems which usually happen in communities. Secondly, students will have more money to take care of themselves if their families can not afford them. For example, 65% of students who lived in rural areas in Vietnam, in 2015, confessed that the immediate working after school provided them stable income for their lives.
On the other hand, there are several benefits while choosing to study at university. In the term of academic, students can learn higher knowledge such as information technology or foreign languages which are important in modern societies. Therefore, they can find a better job or even meet a higher position in companies. Besides, they will have opportunities to get the scholarship which helps them to go and study abroad. For instance, in 2017, 50% of students, who learned at the prestigious National University of Vietnam, went to the USA and Europe where they found their dream jobs.
In conclusion, there are two optimal options for students, so they can choose to learn at university or find a job right after school.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18320610687 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77877275009 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1159290446 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.461538462 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170144634387 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664302063611 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800658514524 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135082137887 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087556005372 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.