some say that music is as important as other subject in schools, especially at the preschool level, do you agree or disagree give you opinion
Few people opine that music is equally important as other academic subjects and should be taught even at the preschool level. I am wholeheartedly agree with this statement .This essay will elaborate advantages of music in the upcoming paragraph.
To begin with, music as a subject in the school gives happiness and entertainment to the pupils which can reduce stress level of the students. For instance, when students go to their music classes then they feel harmony and optimistic. Also, they get to know how to keep calm in every phase of their life. Moreover, learners get more love and affection towards their school due to music and they go everyday to school.
Furthermore, music also develops and broaden their mind. Scholars enjoys learning phase towards their studies .For example, if students face difficulties in their studies then with the help of music tunes , they become easy learners with this interesting way. Moreover, Pupils get positive attitude in their life. Music stream has many career opportunities which leads to a successful life of students.
To put in a nutshell, music should be compulsory subject in the every school because music has many benefits which can make student life better. Also, music makes student life interesting and creative.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1070.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 207.0 242.827586207 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1690821256 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61988794986 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 139.433497537 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599033816425 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0232495286 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1666666667 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.25397266985 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.33497536946 225% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145263749465 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605647229869 0.0925447433944 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656840386353 0.071462118173 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104126498222 0.151781067708 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648678559534 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.