Younger employees have more skills, knowledge and are more motivated than older employees. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some believe that younger workers are more skilled, knowledgeable, and enthusiastic than their older counterparts. I totally disagree with this perspective because there is a direct correlation between the accumulation of these aspects and the amount of time one spends working.
In terms of skills, older workers usually tend to have various kinds of skills. due to longer working lives more experienced employees have had more time to develop a wider range of skills and more time to be proficient at these skills. As well as this, they have had more time to build up communication and people skills during their working lives.
With regard to knowledge, this also takes time to accumulate. Older workers have had more opportunities to obtain knowledge as they are more likely to have done a wider range of employment related tasks. older workers are also more likely to have done worked at numbers of different companies and this also boosts their range of knowledge.
Older workers also tend to be more enthusiastic about their jobs due to being at a more mature stage in their career. As people’s career progresses they start to take on more challenging tasks and this makes work more interesting, which increases motivation. In addition, people tend to take on more responsibility, which usually leads to people being more enthusiastic about going to work.
In conclusion, I totally believe that as people spend more time in their careers they are going to learn more skills, accumulate more knowledge, and have higher levels of motivation to do their jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 6.10837438424 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 20.9802955665 105% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 258.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21317829457 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81185188568 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488372093023 0.580463131201 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3611329318 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333756459371 0.242375264174 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142846463939 0.0925447433944 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789018908864 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205446282475 0.151781067708 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044159643221 0.0609392437508 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32886699507 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 60.0 Out of 90
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