Eating too much sugar is harmful for our health. Some people think it is government responsibility to limit people’s sugar consumption, while others think that it is an individual’s responsibility to limit the amount of sugar they eat. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
After each celebration or event there is desserts or cake to offer for participants. As we all know, sugar is harmful for our health. Some people think that government responsibility to stop people from consuming sugar, and others say that it is an individual responsibility to limit the amount.
On one hand, some people believe that government should do a forward step to reduce people's sugar consumption. First, government must raise taxes on products that include sugar or raw materials. Try to decrease the number of importing or production of sugars and find alternatives. Moreover, awareness campaigns to be done towards sugars side effects on people health. For example, people say that government should put restrictions on sugar items and assist its citizens by doing several orientations. In my opinion, I disagree with this point since no one can put restrictions on what people want to eat, they can warn them from its negative impacts on their health.
On the other hand, several people think it is an individual's charge to limit the amount of sugar they eat. First, human should take care of their health and pay attention to the quantity that they consume. They should reduce and if they can stop eating sugar and its derivatives, they will avoid several health problems such as diabetes and obesity which is the main reason that causes heart attach due to increase in fat. However, people need to know what to eat and when their body ask for sugar. For example, I'm one of those people that cannot avoid consuming sugar or sweet, and sometimes it causes some side effects such as stomach-ache. From my side, I disagree since it is the responsibility of each individual, to take care of himself and know the amount of sugar he should eat per day.
As a conclusion, people want the government to take the full responsibility to limit people's sugar consumption, others think that it is an individual matter and each one must be in charge. In my opinion, we must know how and when to eat sugar to avoid health problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are desserts'?
Suggestion: there are desserts
After each celebration or event there is desserts or cake to offer for participants. As w...
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Line 5, column 513, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... their body ask for sugar. For example, Im one of those people that cannot avoid c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85386819484 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72781175501 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47564469914 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5935120267 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6470588235 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.5082961511 0.244688304435 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186613910748 0.084324248473 221% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134460547839 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.372714177195 0.151304729494 246% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718726490936 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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