Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money,
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center.
Explain the why the center is important for the local community.
Describe the possible effects on local people if the center closed.
Dear Sir,
I am surprised to hear the news that the local council is considering to close the sports and leisure centre in order to save money.
To elucidate community members have been using the club facilities for the past 20 years. Although I don’t enjoy some activities at the club however I try to spend most of my leisure time in the club doing sports activities. Additionally, most of the social gatherings on important festivals are being hosted in the club as it can accommodate large gatherings in the basement. Elderly people use the club for doing exercise and yoga activities to rejuvenate their bodies whereas children use it for sports activities like swimming and other indoor games. Lastly, the club provides meeting rooms where the elderly people from the community gather for pass time.
Therefore the club holds a special place for all the residents in the community as most of the people have had a long association with the club. Furthermore, it is the only club within this town hence without it local community will suffer and their life will become miserable as they would not be able to do social gatherings and exercise regularly.
Yours sincerely
Saud
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am surprised to hear the news that the...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... the community gather for pass time. Therefore the club holds a special place for all ...
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Line 7, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd exercise regularly. Yours sincerely Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, so, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9552238806 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62203687037 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611940298507 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2372150679 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109281072629 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594312183013 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829464134704 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114659892127 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121533354561 0.0580467560999 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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