Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure center that it runs, in order to save money,
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
Give details of how you and your friends or family use the center.
Explain the why the center is important for the local community.
Describe the possible effects on local people if the center closed
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to express my disagreement regarding the recent news about the closure of the sports and leisure centre. Allow me to explain in detail the ramifications.
To elucidate community members have been using the club facilities for the past 20 years. Although I don’t enjoy some activities at the club however I try to spend most of my leisure time along with my family in the club doing sports activities. Additionally, most of the social gatherings on important festivals are being hosted in the club as it can accommodate large gatherings in the basement. Moreover, elderly people use the club for doing exercise and yoga activities to rejuvenate their bodies whereas children use it for sports activities like swimming and other indoor games.
Therefore the club is of importance to all the residents in the community as most of the people use it regularly. Furthermore, it is the only club within this town hence without it local community will suffer and their life will become miserable as they would have to travel a long distance to avail such amenities.
I hope my suggestion is taken into consideration.
Yours sincerely
Saud
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to express my ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ike swimming and other indoor games. Therefore the club is of importance to all the re...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ken into consideration. Yours sincerely Saud
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05102040816 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87465478796 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9827093308 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0916858722262 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042206036763 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406717870909 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0395570381541 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026497896985 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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