There have been problem with public transport you use to commute daily .Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company in your letter.
1. Describe the problems.
2. Explain how these problems effective you and others.
3. Suggest what could be done about it.
Dear sir/madam,
I am Harry, one of the regular commuter who take bus number 11 from providence. I am writing this letter to bring your concern about faulty heater and other issues related to the bus.
Let me explain you in detail, I take a bus early morning 6 am as I have to reach my office at Boston, 9am. There is only one bus available that suites my time, other buses run too early or too late. There are other ten-fifteen passengers also who board that bus regularly like me. The problem is that winter have arrived and the heater of the bus is not working. also there is one window glass broken, which we did not notice during the summer time but not in this chilly weather, it makes our journey worst. Moreover, there are no seat belts for front seat passenger.
These issues affect us greatly because, I got cold every second day due to cold temperature in the bus. seating in the front seat is also very risky for travelers with kids or elderly people as well.
On behalf of all other passengers, I request you to fix the broken glass window and also fix the heaters as they are the basic necessity for bus conductors and driver even. It would be really appreciated, if you could arrange seat belts for first few seats of the bus.
I hope you understand that public transport system is for the convenience of public and it should work finely. Also you consider our problems seriously and take suggestive action as soon as possible. For any queries or formalities you can contact me at 401-452-451
Yours Sincerely
Harry
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-06-07 | harmankaur | 75 | view |
| 2018-11-27 | kaka singh | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...d the heater of the bus is not working. also there is one window glass broken, which...
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Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...d the heater of the bus is not working. also there is one window glass broken, which...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: SUMMER_TIME[2]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...ken, which we did not notice during the summer time but not in this chilly weather, it make...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Seating
...day due to cold temperature in the bus. seating in the front seat is also very risky fo...
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Line 11, column 112, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ce of public and it should work finely. Also you consider our problems seriously and...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 278.0 206.0 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57913669065 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36843940214 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611510791367 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9748596403 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.8666666667 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166367825706 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568762571665 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572817270062 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904749846011 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646868212744 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.