More and more children as assessing internet unsupervised and at young age. This can sometimes put children at risk.
What problems do you think parents face when dealing with their children using the internt?
How can this problem be resolved?
Young children now have access to the internet more easily through latest technological equipments such as smartphones and free wi-fi internet facility at public places which are less governed due to this reason there is no restrictions available for children on the content which they can access over the internet. This has resulted into various problems while dealing with their kids, such as, kids don’t focus on studies, they are addicted to internet, becoming more introvert and so on. There are also some ways as to which this issue can be resolved which we will discuss in detail in this essay.
With the technological advancement the access to the internet has become easier for young children. We now see a sharp decline in the age at which kids now have knowledge and awareness about the internet. This has various challenges which parents face while up bringing their children. Firstly, children are internet addicted as a result they spend less time focusing on their studies. Secondly, they prefer to play online games rather than playing outdoor games. Due to long hours spent using internet then put more strain on their eyes and brain. Moreover, they don’t interact much with their family members and friends as a result they become introvert. Also, without any restrictions on the internet they get access to explicit and adult materials but they don’t have common sense about what is good and bad for them.
There are ways as to how parents can resolve this problem. They can put restrictions on the content to be displayed to the children while browsing internet, In addition, they can guide them about the content to be watched. Moreover, they can set aside the time for which internet to be used during each day.
In conclusion, parents now have a greater role and responsibility to play in order to ensure that children have access to the right and appropriate material and the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there are no restrictions'?
Suggestion: there are no restrictions
...ch are less governed due to this reason there is no restrictions available for children on the content w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut any restrictions on the internet they get access to explicit and adult materia...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01863354037 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5450533198 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509316770186 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.812100745 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.733333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348995805582 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133062402976 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08362332974 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223488776503 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856357982646 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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