An increasing number of people change their career and place of residence several times during their life time. Is this positive or negative development?
individuals tend to have change of environment as the grow older. More and more people now change work and where they live on different occasions due to one reason or the other. To some extend its have both advantages and disadvantages.
one of the benefits of changing house and work at some particular period individual's life is that, it gives opportunity to control how individual want his daily activists to be like.when living and working in a far place it can predispose such an individual to sickness such as hypertension as he has to leave home early and get home late. More so, such person may not have time to know how his family is fairing due to distance and stress of work.
On the other hand, the demerits of incessant change of work and apartment in people's live include, inability to maintain along relationships with people around.As people does this they will have to leave old friends and some family members behind to start building new acquintance with people in new work and apartment. In addition,the financial commitments involved in renting new house and furnishing it might be on the high side and again new skills and trainings have to be under gone before getting used to the new work place and it's job description.
To conclude, although moving from one job and house to a new one helps to program once life and also have extra time for the family . Despite this,it has its own negative effects as worker has to start new all over again and cost of new apartment is expensive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, as to, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69056603774 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62469830877 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562264150943 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.3409144509 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.111111111 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4444444444 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121487573292 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049719556975 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266428368906 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741299758779 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107793860007 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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