You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
1. Say why she/he would not enjoy going to college.
2. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
3. suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Sally,
I am glad to inform you that one of the photographs I took during my recent visit to Norway has been selected to be a part of this month's city exhibition being held next Saturday in the evening at the Epic Hall.
The picture is about a group on people, all in their late forties who were enroute the toughest hike of the country. I was also doing the same hike during that time, when I met them. Though it's nearly impossible for the people of this age to climb that mountain, but they were thoroughly enthusiastic and deterministic about their hike, and it is getting reflected clearly in the picture too.
this picture has won in the category of "Passion and Pain" in this month's selection and I shall be awarded with the first price in the category which is worth over USD 1000.
I am sure you will find time to attend the event along with your family. also, let me know about your arrival schedule so that I can arrange a suitable seating arrangement for all of you.
Your truly,
Deepak
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sally, I am glad to inform you that one of the ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...lected clearly in the picture too. this picture has won in the category of &apo...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'months'' or 'month's'?
Suggestion: months'; month's
...of 'Passion and Pain' in this months selection and I shall be awarded with t...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ttend the event along with your family. also, let me know about your arrival schedul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59139784946 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.419999914 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655913978495 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8899805051 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.75 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.25 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116146633881 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469425948047 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0284165016874 0.0603063233224 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0611933912248 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284267358544 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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