The charts below give Information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy In 2000 and projections for 2050.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of different age groups of yemen, italy in 2000 and also make a prediction for 2050.
Overall, the number of people over 60 was and will be the lowest of yemen in 2000, while the proportion of children in italy was estimated the least significant.
The rate of people from 0 to 14 was the highest in yemen but this feature will reduce sharply by 13 percent in 2050. this age group in italy will be affected by the same decreasing trend and will fall from 14,3 to 11,5 percent
The other two age groups in both countries listed in the chart will show opposite major trends. while people from 15 to 60 and above 60 will see a noticeable decline. The percentage of people over 60 experienced an upward trend, however the proportion of people from 15 to 59 will fall to 46,2 percent in 2050
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: This
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Suggestion: While
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 678.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43137254902 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39889760662 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535947712418 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 198.9 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7039832896 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190940051976 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113548749594 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115288952063 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154770292585 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118010644714 0.0819641961636 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.71 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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